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Nativeに直してもらった英語をまとめていけば、言い回しとかaとかtheとかの使い方が身に付きそうな気がする。
- 誤 AAA setup with the combination of either BBB or CCC
- 正 AAA setup in combination with either BBB or CCC
- 誤 Figure shows the nuclear chart in light mass region.
- 正 Figure shows the nuclear chart in the light mass region.
図で読者に示しているからtheがつく?
- 誤 Regularly, neutron drip line gradually evolves with increase of atomic numbger.
- 正 Normally, the neutron drip line gradually evolves with increasing atomic number.
- 誤 Mechanism of this unique behavior is ...
- 正 The mechanism of this unique behavior is ...
- 誤 Therefore, experimental study on unbound ...
- 正 Therefore, an experimental study of unbound ...
studyにはaがつくらしい。
- 誤 it has magic numbers Z=8 and N=20
- 正 It is a doubly-magic nucleus with magic numbers Z=8 and N=20.
has magic numbersとは言わないのかな。
- 誤 contribution of pf shells
- 正 contribution of pf shell
sを付けなくて良いみたい。
- 誤 28O has closed-shell structure
- 正 28O has a closed-shell structure
structureにはaがつくらしい。
- 誤 Excitation energy of the first 2+ state is ...
- 正 The excitation energy of the first 2+ state is ...
第一2+状態はunknownでも唯一のものだからtheを付けて問題ない、と思う。はじめのtheはエネルギーまだ知らないからtheを付けないと思っていたけどそうではないみたい。
- 誤 However the study could not rule out possibility of other states.
- 正 However the study could not rule out the possibility of other states.
これはなぜtheを付けていいのか理解できていない。。。